29/01/21 Evaluation(PEER and Self)
- samratnembang
- Feb 1, 2021
- 1 min read
Updated: Feb 19, 2021

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Describe what others saw in your work, did they understand your process, and did they notice things about your work that were unexpected?
Coughing is a bit loud. Characters need to have background context. The charcoal was nice. Add more colours using chalk or oil pastels. The use of sounds needs more personality and is monotonal.
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How did others interpret your work, what did they see, was there something unexpected? Did they see what you wanted them to see, or is there something that was unclear or misinterpreted?
Surrealistic, when in dark times, you need something badly but its not necessary good for you. the burger could of been drugs or something else. a good use of macguffin.
Jasmine thought you don’t need a burger to survive.
Abbie thought it was story about wanting a burger
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What did others think of your work? What would they have changed about your work and do you agree with them? What might you do differently next time based on this?
Black paper with chalk.



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